Group+persuasive+letter

1-31-12 Dear Mrs. Schultz, We highly suggest that you consider purchasing a climbing rope for the County Line gym. There are many strong reasons, but we will just tell you the most important ones.

Our first reason is safety and responsibility. The climbing group will always have blue, squishy mats under the rope for kids who are scared to climb down or in case someone falls. Next, we surely require making a chart with safety rules. Finally, we will learn to respect the equipment by properly using and taking care of it.

Our second reason is the climbing rope will increase kids’ physical ability. It most definitely will help us strengthen leg muscles. The rope will truthfully improve our upper body strength when we climb the rope. Another benefit is agility. Being agile will help kids absolutely improve their sport skills for now and in the future.

The last and the most important reason is that having a rope will certainly encourage more teamwork with students. Students will learn to take turns showing respect for each other which is a very powerful County Line Comet Code rule. Also the climbing rope encourages people to do better at trying harder. Finally having a climbing rope will require boys and girls to cooperate.

We are strongly hoping you will allow us to have this climbing rope because of all of our important reasons.

Sincerely, Adam,Josh,Jajuan,Amaya

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