Colin's+Group+Persuasive+Letter

Dear Mrs. Cyrzan, **Who doesn’t like hot chocolate? Nobody! To prove that, we have** surveyed a total of 20 kids, and 17 students truly LOVE hot chocolate. Your fantastic 5th grade class is betting that you love hot chocolate too, so why can’t we all have hot chocolate on special occasions?

Our first reason is that we most definitely think this is a healthy drink choice. We could put milk, a dairy product, in our hot chocolate. There is calcium in milk, and calcium greatly strengthens your bones. Instead of putting marshmallows in our hot chocolate, we could use whipped cream which is surely healthier than marshmallows since it is a wonderful, tasty dairy product.

BRRRRRRR!!! Your body is freezing; you touch the cup of steaming hot chocolate, ahhhhhhh that feels great!!! It’s so warm. What we are saying is that hot chocolate will positively warm us up from the chilling recess. We eagerly know after an intensely cold winter recess, that you will be freezing cold from the outdoors. So we highly feel that we will pay much more attention in class if we’re warm and cozy.

Our last and most important reason is that it could absolutely be a reward. For example, we have achieved completing a full Chester body. That means that we’re honestly an unquestionably fantastic and respectful class. In addition, since this supremely great reward is such a tasty treat, 5CZ is surely to continue following the County Line Comet Code.

Because of our persuasive reasons we certainly hope that you take our suggestion of letting us have hot chocolate into consideration.

Your students, Anna, Anusha, Colin, Meghan

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