Hagen,+Alyssa+F

Come join me as I fly through the sky. See how I improve and if I go up, down, or stay the same. Below are links to my writing pieces with the first being my earliest writing and the last, the most recent. At the end of every writing piece is a place for you to blog about my writing. Give me feedback, compliments, or advice on my writing. Please blog about my ideas, word choice, voice, sentence fluency, organization, and conventions such as spelling, capitalization, and punctuation. That will help me build up and blast off as I go through the clouds of thought, get stuck, and ride through. You'll be suprised on how I can blast off in my writing!