Lily's+Persuasive+Letter

Dear Mrs. Shultz,

Our group desperately wishes you would consider letting us use our own electronics in school. In our opinion, letting us use electronics in school will certainly encourage us to enjoy school, learn responsibility, and it also has educational value.

Our first reason is that electronics most definitely have educational value. First of all, there are wonderful math apps that truthfully increase math skills. There are also books on IPods, IPhones, IPads to improve reading skills. In addition, there are amazing educational utilities, such as flash cards, calculators, calendars, the weather, and many more. Children will learn about electronics because the world now is about electronics.

The second outstanding reason is responsibility. We thought of an idea that if you lose your electronic device twice, you will not be able to bring it back. If you see someone lose an electronic device you will see their reaction and you will not want to lose yours. Kids will need to be responsible by bringing it and also in a case.

The last wonderful reason is that you probably know that students will enjoy school more. Our first thought is we think that children will not be bored. For example, if a kid gets extremely bored just say you can use electronics. Secondly it makes school a lot more fun. Also we thought of the days we should be able to use electronics on Monday and Friday. Mondays we are usually tired from the weekend, and Fridays we’re all hyper for the fun weekend.

We extremely recommend you letting us use electronics in school. We truthfully hope these reasons convinced you. Thank you for reading this letter!

Sincerely, Cory, Matt, Jasen, Lily, and Abby