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Lily-Rose,

You have a great imagination and use your words well to describe your thoughts. I especially like how I pictured a hyena running around in your How To writing. I also enjoyed reading about Nelly Cane and her 'exaggerated' accomplishments. I would like to see a reindeer lift 1,000,000 tons! In the writing to Mrs. Shultz, I can just imagine how much fun it was to work with your classmates and come up with all these good ideas. I have to say you guys made some good points.

All in all, your writing has improved each year and you make me happy to see you are doing well.

Your Dad,

Marty Ybarra