Zachary'sGroup+Persuasive+Writing

Dear Mrs. Schultz,

If you want your students to have fun, exercise, and learn how to work as a team, you should most definitely bring field day back to County Line School.

Our first reason is because we will all especially have a fun time getting fresh air and sunshine. The most fun time we will have is playing games such as Indiana Jones, Dodge Ball, and the Egg Pass. It is important to have fun and enjoy learning and studying so you can significantly do better in school.

Secondly field day will unquestionably provide us with lots of physical activity. This day will absolutely make us stronger, and we will become more healthy and fit. Active bodies help power our brains to think.

On to our most important reason, teamwork! Field day positively teaches team work for all students. By learning new, games, and activities, students will greatly learn to work together. With field day, kids will respectfully cheer on and support each other when they play the games. It will also benefit the students good attitudes and their fairness.

We crucially suggest bringing field day back to the County Line Comets. At the end of field day, we will all get better at physical activity and team work while having fun. WOW! Now that beats almost anything! GO COMETS!

Your 5th grade students, Katie, Zach, Shane, and Jonathan

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